Not bad at all
It was really good, but I do want to say that some of the cursing was unneccessary... Some of the pure comedy of strawberry clock is his childish nature and nievity, and having him curse left and right doesn't fit and isn't that funny... One of the best sets of dialogue of strawberry clock ever is: "No candy? // No candy! // No puppy? // no puppy... // NO PUPPY!!! What kind of madman would do such a thing" Next time, tone down the curses and "pube mupet" toilet humor is great, but is only only funny once, true comedy comes from unique ideas...
Good luck making more