Not bad at all
It was really good, but I do want to say that some of the cursing was unneccessary... Some of the pure comedy of strawberry clock is his childish nature and nievity, and having him curse left and right doesn't fit and isn't that funny... One of the best sets of dialogue of strawberry clock ever is: "No candy? // No candy! // No puppy? // no puppy... // NO PUPPY!!! What kind of madman would do such a thing" Next time, tone down the curses and "pube mupet" toilet humor is great, but is only only funny once, true comedy comes from unique ideas...
Good luck making more
Not tooo shabby
I really like what you have done, its good, but I must say, as a general comment to most animators. Taking funny sounds and putting a reptitive (not created by you) animation to it isn't that hard and really isn't that great. Peanut Butter Jelly Time was a hit more of the song and less of the animations. What was done was good, but one could spend more time making different animations or downloading them and using them to make it more unique and less about the sound which was just downloaded off of kazaa or something....
well the whole driving force of my movies is the sound. this is all about the joke. there is not much one can do with these movies.
Not too shabby
I really enjoy the style of the animation, but the graphics were a little lacking.. it was good, but nothing too great, but don't say: "bob won't die" cause with graphics like that, they will need to improve along with storyline for it to be good
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